Hmmm
Not bad, it's pretty interesting, the sliding instrument was a little odd at first, but by the end I really liked it, maybe a little to much flanger/phaser/whatever but it's still pretty good. It sounds beautiful overall. Definitely awesome.
Hmmm
Not bad, it's pretty interesting, the sliding instrument was a little odd at first, but by the end I really liked it, maybe a little to much flanger/phaser/whatever but it's still pretty good. It sounds beautiful overall. Definitely awesome.
Thanks. Yeah I tried a lot to fix that instrument but nothing worked. I had to use it though to tie it to the original song.
Glad you liked it, though!
Hmmm
The waves sound so much better then the last time you uploaded it, like infinitely better. I really like your song, I have to admit. It sounds good. Good luck in the competition.
thanks good luck to you as well. =]
Some of it seems
Pretty high pitch, but I'm to lazy to put on headphones. However, it just seems to high pitch at points. I mean I really like the song in general, just bring it down a little bit, especially on the wobble bass. That's my laptop speaker suggestion, sorry if you disagree.
When I put on my headphones that doesn't seem to be a big issue for me, but thanks for the feedback!
The kick
The kick at about :50 is kick ass. I like all the ambience of this track. This is really good dubstep, I'm not gonna lie. Good shit. Very Epic, though the high part at 2:40 ish, not sure exactly when it starts is a pretty annoying. But other then that, it's not bad. Love from 3:30 on.
Thx for the review! That "high part" seems to be the trance-like pads if I understood correctly. I may have left too much high "sizzle" in them...hmm....
Well anyways, thx for sharing: it's better to hear what's not liked versus what is so I know what/where to improve.
Echoing
Some of the echoing notes seem to clash, make sure you're watching out what notes your using that echo cause they will clash with later notes. It just made it sound really out of place. My opinion though
Should be a fairly easy fix - I think honestly I used a little bit too much reverb throughout the song. I thought it blended well but it was more or less a quick fix for a problem that could have been solved in a different manner.
This actually was an unfinished song for quite some time and never got around to finishing it--
thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated : )
Lols
You recieve all of the lawls, also check out gothsicles, you're pretty similar, and at the same time, not.
i actually went thru a little spell where i was into them at one point. i forgot all about them - thanks for refreshing my memory XD
Not really hiphop in my opinion
but then again I'm not a fan. However, it is a pretty nice loop, so I give you credit. Seems like it needs to be mastered, but that's about it. Brings some of the sounds down a bit.
Thanks for the review. I was listening to some hip hop songs. Best attempt bottom line. Lol
Needs more everything else
I think the samples and drums are fine, though boring and repetitive but, it needs more everything else during the intro, like bass and pads or whatever. Just something to keep it interesting. Then the synth at the end was kind of more annoying then good. Listen to it and ask yourself, does this sound good, and trust me, it's never to late to delete 80% of your song and redo
sounds good to me.
because i listen to a lot of afrojack :/
The intro is a little
very boring. Even the wobble bass isn't enough to keep me interested. Add some more in the intro and it'll be better. I mean, it's not terrible. Just seems to need a lot of work on the intro. -skips through a little- Sounds exactly the same late in the song. Some different pads, but pretty boring overall. Speeding it up isn't how you solve boring, you solve boring by making it interesting, or call it ambience, cause this could definitely pull that off.
Thanks for the constructive critique.
I didn't speed it up to make it less boring, it was requested to be sped up a bit and I realize it takes more than speed to make a song.
Thanks for the suggestions on this, I'll take them into consideration and at least apply them to later tracks,
Thanks for stopping by!
Omega
Voice
It's to loud over the music, it's just way to loud in my opinion, cause I love the backing track. The vocals not bad, but it's just too loud. Also, I'm way to white for "gangsta" rap. But this isn't bad. So keep it up, just back off the rapping a bit and this would be good. Also, expand vocabulary, the N word doesn't need to be in every third sentence, just saying. It has no artistic value in this situation.
a newer mixed verion is on youtube. look it upby Slankz'D
Age 33, Male
Washtenaw Community College
Michigan
Joined on 3/15/09