You were sick
For a month? That must've sucked. At about 50 seconds a melody started up, but it was far to quiet, I could barely hear it over the bass. The piano also needs to be louder. It all sort of just melded together with no clear melody, it was just hard to hear and disfocused. I personally didn't like it, I'd prefer if you brought one melody to the front, and then pushed it back, and brought in the other one. At 2:40 it got good though, I really like the melody here. Your synths sound good. I love your build ups, way better then whatever it is I do. The little 8-bit sounding sound that gets louder, fantastic. I love the wood block sound that keeps the constant beat, though the melody feels a little repetitive at times, just a little, I like the variations in it, but some times the melody seems to drag on, rather then push the song. Good ending, liked it :D