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PainasaurusRex

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Echoing

Some of the echoing notes seem to clash, make sure you're watching out what notes your using that echo cause they will clash with later notes. It just made it sound really out of place. My opinion though

DjOros responds:

Should be a fairly easy fix - I think honestly I used a little bit too much reverb throughout the song. I thought it blended well but it was more or less a quick fix for a problem that could have been solved in a different manner.

This actually was an unfinished song for quite some time and never got around to finishing it--

thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated : )

Awesome

A good start to a song :D

meh

Repetitive, and overall I thought it was boring but each their own. It just kind of did the same thing, over, and over, and over again, just with the slightest change. I think you could do much better. I made it 2 min in, and I was just bored.

Lols

You recieve all of the lawls, also check out gothsicles, you're pretty similar, and at the same time, not.

l0vemetal responds:

i actually went thru a little spell where i was into them at one point. i forgot all about them - thanks for refreshing my memory XD

Not really hiphop in my opinion

but then again I'm not a fan. However, it is a pretty nice loop, so I give you credit. Seems like it needs to be mastered, but that's about it. Brings some of the sounds down a bit.

SaltyRiceGroup responds:

Thanks for the review. I was listening to some hip hop songs. Best attempt bottom line. Lol

Needs more everything else

I think the samples and drums are fine, though boring and repetitive but, it needs more everything else during the intro, like bass and pads or whatever. Just something to keep it interesting. Then the synth at the end was kind of more annoying then good. Listen to it and ask yourself, does this sound good, and trust me, it's never to late to delete 80% of your song and redo

Mans0n responds:

sounds good to me.
because i listen to a lot of afrojack :/

The intro is a little

very boring. Even the wobble bass isn't enough to keep me interested. Add some more in the intro and it'll be better. I mean, it's not terrible. Just seems to need a lot of work on the intro. -skips through a little- Sounds exactly the same late in the song. Some different pads, but pretty boring overall. Speeding it up isn't how you solve boring, you solve boring by making it interesting, or call it ambience, cause this could definitely pull that off.

Omega-Ravager responds:

Thanks for the constructive critique.

I didn't speed it up to make it less boring, it was requested to be sped up a bit and I realize it takes more than speed to make a song.

Thanks for the suggestions on this, I'll take them into consideration and at least apply them to later tracks,

Thanks for stopping by!

Omega

Voice

It's to loud over the music, it's just way to loud in my opinion, cause I love the backing track. The vocals not bad, but it's just too loud. Also, I'm way to white for "gangsta" rap. But this isn't bad. So keep it up, just back off the rapping a bit and this would be good. Also, expand vocabulary, the N word doesn't need to be in every third sentence, just saying. It has no artistic value in this situation.

SlankzD responds:

a newer mixed verion is on youtube. look it upby Slankz'D

That's pretty awesome

Well done, I can see your experience in the song.

Awesome

I could tell it was you just by listening to it. It sounds great, good luck in the competition :D

OpenLight responds:

Haha thank you, Prex.

Prex @PainasaurusRex

Age 32, Male

Washtenaw Community College

Michigan

Joined on 3/15/09

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