Minecraft
Is exactly what I thought it was about before I noticed the comment at the end. I lol'd when I read that though. This song is really good, but I'm with omega on this one, the singing needs to be sped up a bit. Most of the words seem a little dragged out. Other then that though, I liked it. Great song again. The lyrics are fantastic though. Absolutely love them.
haha, it's a great game! but thank you for your feedback, much appreciated. I shall fix the singing!
Ehhhh
The sounds were pretty boring but I did like the cover. I don't know other then that, it was a pretty good translation though you should learn more of the song then just the intro.
thanks for the review :D
just one question though, what do you mean by boring?
as in the they were pretty clean cut and empty or...
Good shtuff
Sounds awesome, just as a side comment though, not sure how spacey it is, but I won't judge based on that. This is an awesome song. I really enjoyed listening to it.
P.S. Good luck in the competition :D
I don't think it's from that
but I think the reason it sounds familiar is that you did such a good job of capturing the idea. Well done sir/madam. This is a really good song. Sounds psuedo 8-bit. On a side note though, it loops kind of oddly, might want to look into the first few seconds, in my opinion, but overall I liked the song. :D
P.S. Good luck in the competition
Thanks! I put in some "flanged gameboy synth arpeggios" in there so I guess that kinda made it sound pseudo 8 bit.
Yeah, I could never get the whole looping thing right on newgrounds. Usually the stuff loops weirdly the 1st time round but after that its not so bad. Any way around it?
P.S. I'm a guy :)
Very similar
This song is very similar to the jungle of your mind, and by that I mean it the other way since this was released before that one, however, they sound very much a like in instrument choice. So make sure that you don't get stuck to a few instruments or anything. Very nice song though.
Hmmmm
Pretty beautiful, very short though. I do like it, but I agree with Gamekrazzy that the intro needs a little work. However, I do like it. Though I still feel like I'm listening to the midi of a song. However, still getting a feel for your style, so maybe that's just how you write. I'll find out soon enough.
Pretty good... but
The high part at :40 was a little loud and over powering. Seems to me it needs to be brought down a tad and maybe made a little different since it sounds like a midi sound, though that may have been what you were going for, I don't really know your style.
thanks for the reviews and for the midi sound i realize people have a hard time creating beats so i decided to create simple tracks that do have and impact and left room for improvement so people could take them and make them there own. alot of the instrument choices for most of them are the same i was messing around with a few variations in of my tracks using the feedback you guys give me to created better tracks so i could get rid of some of my older ones . thank you very much though this really helps me out alot
39 seconds
39 seconds of silence. And this doesn't like Dance, it sounds more like Dubstep. But it could be good. Just keep working on it. Needs work though.
haha yeah the 39 seconds it was a little exporting problem that i had and.. ehrm yeah originally it was going to be a dubstep... .. it was
Melodies
Good melodies, just needs different sounds. The instrument choices were rather odd and lent it to a very midi feel. Then the drums near the end were really quiet and kind of annoying. So, keep on trying, one day you may be making amazing music.
Sweet
The intro was a little long, probably could have been shortened. That was to long, and sample was well used, I have to admit, though really long. Sweet stuff, and you should really make sure you get all the copyright information for the sample. I really liked it. I could imagine playing a game to this.
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